Spysar wrote:I don't want to say anything bad about someones trophy....
I agree with Spysar about this statement but in this case this is Stanley’s deer and we exchanged a pm about a critique and Stanley wants it.
What I list below is not from the perspective of a competition quality critique, but mainly just standard things that a commercial mount should have with most of the issues being general anatomy issues (shapes and alignment) and the finish work (painting) – but no finish job will look good if the skin is not in the proper locations to begin with especially around the eyes, nose, and mouth.
That’s a McKenzie 4600 Full Sneak. I’ve mounted a few of those. The swoop in the neck is the way the manikin was made. It’s an o.k. form but IMO it has some problems.
I can tell from the cape this is not an early season deer. The smaller neck could be from using a form that is too small and/or the hair was groomed/slicked down too much.
Here is what I see with this mount:
Antlers (skull cap) are set too high and skull cap was not blended properly to manikin.
Ear butts (muscles at base of ear that attach to head) are not the correct shape or size and the placement is a bit too far back on the skull.
Ear edges are too wavy and therefore incorrect. The wavy edges are likely due to not fully turning the ears when skinning and many times they need to be turned a bit more after tanning.
Eye shape is off a little but not too bad.
Paint around the eyes is terrible – wrong colors and not all of eye area is painted.
Eye iris color is lighter than I like in a mount but it is within an acceptable range for deer eye color. You can get deer eyes in light, medium, and dark colors. The eyes in this mount look like the cheap concave/convex eyes. I’m not saying you need the most expensive eyes but there are better choices out there and for only a few dollars more.
The pupils are in the correct orientation (horizontal).
Skin/hair pattern alignment around leg stubs and brisket is generally o.k.
Grooming on neck could be better.
Nose pad skin alignment, including around nostrils is off.
Nose paint color is too black.
The “smile” isn’t too bad. Some forms have more of a “smile” to them than others.
Back corner of mouth skin alignment and cowlick at that location look o.k.
Ear tips looked to be curved forward a little and that is not correct. They should be curved back a little. The ears look like they were probably done with Bondo. Correct ears can be done in Bondo they just need a little more care while doing them than this mount had. Another option is to use earliners but the ears still need to be turned to the edges before mounting.
The camera flash may have washed out the photos and colors, but the nostrils and ears should have more fleshy colored paint.
Overall, it’s a poor mount. If this was put in the commercial division (what you guys would get for a standard customer mount) of a competition which is judged on a 5-foot rule and no touching of the mount, IMO it would be about a third place or honorable mention. If it was in the open/professional division, which is a step up from the commercial division, IMO it would be an honorable mention (4th place).
Stanley – you wanted advice straight up on what this guy needs to do to get better. He needs to do a one on one with a good deer taxidermist (if he’s in Iowa he could look into taking a class with Joe Meder). He could also join his state taxidermy association, go to seminars to learn more and compete. Competition is not for everyone but you can learn a lot of good information from the judge and talking to other accomplished taxidermists. Competitions are what each taxidermist makes of them. If you want to learn you will. If you don’t care you will continuously spin your wheels and not get better. I have seen both cases where some guys excel in a short amount of time and others flounder year after year. If he chooses to get better it will cost him some money. I have never attended a school. There are some good ones and bad ones. From what I understand the schools teach you the basics. After you go to a school, to get better you will need to learn more advanced methods/techniques on you own or take a one on one with a very good taxidermist.